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Talia Barnes's avatar

"All My Friends are Finding New Beliefs" made me feel things. I think I'm seeing what you mean about this poetry thing lol :)

Jessica Wills's avatar

Aw good! I have yet to show that poem to someone and have them not feel things.

Thomas B. Andrews's avatar

Loved this piece, Jessica. Too often people (including myself, sometimes) give up on a poem because they can’t find their way logically through the language. It wasn’t until I realized that I needed to listen more to my emotional response rather than my logical one. I remember reading 'The Hollow Men,' and though I didn’t fully understand every image, I was deeply moved. I followed that movement and found myself closer to understanding. I also agree that poetry is often the only form of writing about spirituality or religion that can truly move me. The abstract nature of poetry simply fits too well with the unknowable nature of God. However, I did read Graham Greene’s novel 'The End of the Affair' earlier this year, which I now hold as perhaps the best piece of fiction dealing with religion I’ve ever read. I highly recommend it! Happy New Year!

The Proctor Charlie Collective's avatar

Coincidentally I posted this morning on the haiku form, also a good place to start for anyone even slightly poetically inclined. There is a reason the haiku has been popular for centuries.

The Proctor Charlie Collective's avatar

Your first comments took me back to the last poetry class I attempted at the University of Washington during the tenure of Nelson Bentley in the early '70s. Under his tutelage poetry was all about "imagery." I showed him my poem Break in Bulk (inspired by my 100 level Geography class):

The thriving town

Between power and sound

Grows rich on the bounty of friction

Til supplies and demands

Across foreign lands

Slows to a trickle of fiction

He chuckled, and then asked me what it meant, I began to explain a couple layers of meaning and, incredibly, he replied, "Poems don't mean more than one thing."

Fortunately I soon found kindred spirits among the English poets of the 16th and 17th centuries.

And then I very much identified with your comments around spiritual writing. To a person mystics of just about every stripe seem to echo Tennyson's frustration with the limitations of words, in particular I think of the Spanish mystics of the 17th century like Theresa of Avila and John of the Cross.

Spiritual poets who seem to me not frustrated at all are the Sufis, like Rumi and Hafez and the amazing 20th Century Bengali poet Rabindranath Tagore.

Jessica Wills's avatar

That’s so funny! For me it was a very confused history professor. Glad you kept at it! Thanks as always for your thoughtful comment.

Shiv's avatar

Thank you for introducing me to Tennyson’s "In Memoriam". I loved the passage you included in your writing.

Your lines, “Poetry is for what can’t be spoken any other way” and “Reading a truly excellent poem reminds me of putting on glasses for the first time. It wows you in the moment and leaves your vision a little clearer forever,” both resonated deeply with me.

I agree that poetry often has a reputation for being difficult & inaccessible, and too often, I think people feel intimidated by it. At the same time, I appreciate it too. I love the rhythm and the intentional choice of words in poetry. That level of care is something I enjoy and admire.